I live in Tuen Mun, a district in Hong Kong. I hate Hong Kong because Hong Kong's air pollution is serious. Air pollution makes us very poor. Noise pollution hurts our ears. The worst pllution is environmental pollution. It makes our global temperature higher and higher. It makes us very hot in Autumn. So, I hate Hong Kong.
The true story:
I love Hong Kong. Hong Kong has many tourist spots, such as Lantau Island, Ocean Park, Victoria Park, and the new place in Hong Kong, Ngong Ping 360. I have been to Lantau Island and Ocean Park before. They are good places in Hong Kong. There are very beautiful. I love Hong Kong very much.
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Hello!Mr Chow.. I think CiCi's writing is better than my writing really.She can write many new words that I do not understand.Maybe,it is a good point in her writing. Also,I think CiCi's first part of the blog is her true feeling too.It also is my true feel and I really think Hong Kong's air pollution is serious.I am appreciation her writing.
回覆刪除Winnie, happy new year! Thanks for your comment.
回覆刪除I don't think Cici's first part shows her true feelings because it can be an interesting but false part! But the second part should show the true story!
Actually different students have different good things in their writing. Hope you and your classmates can learn from one another!
Hello!Mr Chow! Winnie and Cici's writing is good!I am so sorry that I don't know what did you say... Although it is too late, I also want to say "Happy New Year!" to you.
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